All Comments on 'Summer Swimmers'

by saturnitatis

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MNWingMNWing7 months ago

excellent first post

DivaDyfiDivaDyfi7 months ago

Good one! Let's have more.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This 'you' perpective destroys the whole Story, ostracizing lots of readers.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Is this a story only for women? The annoying YOU style makes it impossible to read for m8st men.

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