by JimmyThePlunger
MY apologies, I see that I have fucked up the submission of this story and I'm trying to discover how to correct it.
Good story well worded. The reprinting of the draft not really a big problem. Is a credible story of an aging couples sex life. A rare 5 for me.
Jimmy, the only way to fix it is to ask that it be deleted and wait a week and re-file it under an 'edited' Super sex submission. Hope that helps.
Thanks for your kind comments on my fuck up. Edited version submitted and I hope a little imporved as well as corrected.
5 Big Blazing Stars for Jimmy! Hey, Jimmy, don't feel bad. No One is perfect. We all make mistakes. So what if the story was printed twice. All it causes is a little confusion. Meanwhile it is a great heartwarming story. I alway empathize with the main characters so I was imagining it being me. Unfortunately, I'm not that Lucky. LOL Regardless, Great Story, Great Writing, Great Effort, Great job overall. Only problem is all the whiny complainers that don't appreciate the 40 to 60 hours of work we put into these free stories. Then, the whiners on Lit and especially the Loving Wives section spend all day complains about every thing they can imagine. Heck, most of the complainers admit they don't even both to read the stories. They just get on here to complain. Myself, I always spend the two weeks after a story is published deleting nasty comments. LOL
Good Effort Jimmy, I appreciate you. Don't let the rascally rascals get you down! Buster2U
Yes! A story so nice it had to be told twice!
Thank you, I appreciate the effort to write and share!
Submit it as you first did, exactly the same title. Put "resubmitted to remove duplicate text" in the submission comments. Larual will see you want it replaced.
interesting idea. Usually in LW you read the wife taking a lover because of the husbands ED and it does not go well. Here you have a husband taking a lover because the wife says OK and all goes well.
My parents enjoyed sex to their mid 80's until they both passed away in their late 80's. Thank you for sharing.
I'll tell you with an example. You sit in the beer garden and drink a fresh beer and enjoy life. Then a woman comes to the table, takes your beer glass and spits in it and moves on. Question: would you finish the beer? Certainly not. But why am I asking you, do you stay with a partner who has had sex with someone else even though you are married to him? Because you're mentally ill or because you're a writer on Lit! That can only be the reason!
I think martens , below, got it wrong, love is complicated thing, different in all of us, yes a cheater isn’t a loving partner, but someone taking what is being given by their loving partner isn’t cheating, I'm not into sharing, I’m old school, when you marry it’s THE contract that binds you 2 together, but sex being a physical thing when one of the parties loses their ability to enjoy it AND arranges a sub to take their place, it must have been done with love, so much as this is just a story it has real feelings about it, likely to happen? No not very often.
But as a story I felt it was a good one, nice pace, nice characters , well written.