All Comments on 'Superman Bewitched Ch. 01'

Very nice start and I cant wait to see where you go from here.

Yes, a very good story with excellent possibilities for follow-up. It is appropriate and quite stirring to read about the mighty Man of Steel being seduced and dominated by an awesome sorceress /villainess. Deep down in his extraterrestrial subconsciousness he has probably always wanted to be at the mercy of such a lovely and powerful female figure, and you are writing about this happening. A very good effort.