All Comments on 'Surprise Anniversary'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Liked it

Good little story, quirky change around on most non consent stories.

RuneulfRuneulfover 4 years ago
Good story

Love the theme and how devious she is. Could have used a bit more description of both the emotions of each character and the sexual details. I hope you will be writing more and will check back.

FailedscoutFailedscoutover 4 years ago

Great Story!!!

This was really hot. There are so few stories where a devious girlfriend keeps the husband drained so that he can't perform for his wife, especially when the husband still loves and gets along with the wife.

I would really enjoy reading about how Kami gets Mr M addicted to her manipulations and keeps him drained and unable to perform. Or perhaps puts him in chastity and he has to keep his wife from seeing or feeling the chastity device. So many evil things that Kami could do to make Mr M squirm and make excuses not to have sex with his wife....

Thank you so much for writing this and posting it here.

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Long time reader, novice writer. I hope you enjoy my writing. Would love to hear your feedback.