by m_storyman_x
I havent read any of ur storys before and i dont think i'll start now! I can see that u r a proficient writer, i just dont like the story line or the main character's! The male comes across as arrogant and conceited that he wont get caught and the wife as a dumb witted fool! Did he really have to fuck the wife after just fucking mary? I feel sorry for the wife! Could u not have them both as swingers? Did he really have to be married and why cant the wife join in? Maybe some people get off by humiliating and degrading a partner but im not one of them! ¤irish kitten
...stopped reading too soon.
Most of his objections are dealt with in Ch. 07, which is a turning point in the story, with the remaining two chapters which take off from it.
I do not want to give away what happens, so will just say it does not turn out "humiliating and degrading" to the wife, as Mr. Anonymous feared.
Having read all 9 chapters, I can say this was an entertaining series that I am glad I read.
Paul in Oklahoma
Yep, this story is HOT!!
To the hater from years ago, too bad you cannot read the story lines for this, or did not, 'cause all this is gonna change.
I am on to the next chapter now, myself...YeeHaw, y'all!
Five Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌