All Comments on 'Surprised in the Shower'

0-slut in 0.1s. Couldn't have been more of a yawner or less believable if you tried.

Loved it

To the comment below... It's smut. It was appropriately smutty. It's not real, it doesn't have to feel real. It needs to feel sexy, and if these were things you enjoy (stepfam, older men, multiples, forced/coerced) then this was right on point.

Haters gonna hate.

Where's the next part!?? So good need it now!

Very hot, would love additional chapters!

Looking forward to reading the next part .great story ,captivating

I loved this short story, and it really left me wanting more! Will Cindy still resist when her stepfather gets there? What will they do to her? Is this a one time thing with them or will she continue to service them through summer? Will she meet other guys on the app she uses? What will she become when shes back at college? SO much left to explore. I hope a second one comes soon! :)

Great captivating story ,part 2 needed

me too - MORE, please? with sugar on top? :-)

can't wait for more!

Omg please more! This is amazing

Need the next chapter. Have me in the heat of the moment. Please