All Comments on 'Surprising Dowdy Dani'

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john1946 over 13 years ago

Fun

It was a fun story

Anonymousover 13 years ago

Interesting writing inspiration! I tried your 'tips' and they actually work. Very nice. The turna-around on the 'SURPRISEING' part caught me. I hope you meant the twist on the word. Good job.

LitEroCat over 13 years agoAuthor

Thanks for noticing...

That 'SURPRISING' had a surprise. Hopefully, you were not the only one. I didn't want to be any more blatant. No ideas about the post script or why Lois insisted I write this???

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Nice story.

I'd love a sequel for when the show the husband how to send his wife 1000 miles high! And....how they progress when he is healthy.

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