All Comments on 'Surprising Relationship Evolutions'

I love this theme and nearly all of your stories, so I definitely hope there will be a chapter 2. Thanks for writing and sharing this story with us.

I would love to read more of this story! I love the slow build up, one of my favorites! Very hot

Another excellent story !

This was a very good story and could probably use at least one more chapter. Let me tell why Connor Choice Vivian to be his key holder. First she is not Romantically Involved with him and she not a total bitch. As for his friend with benefits Bobbie. She is not the long term relationship and marriage that she wants no part of, and now that she has become best friends. She is almost as bad as his ex, with her denying him an orgasms. Now as for his ex, Kathleen she is just one vindictive cheating bitch. Besides cheat on him with big Mike, that he had video recorded her fucking him. But for her to late name her new big dildo "big mike", that just to the it more in to his face of her past cheating. You can't love your husband, if your cheating on him. And for to try and reconciliation with Connor, and start playing FLR or FLM relationships without Allow a quick orgasm in her as a I'm sorry fuck, then start denying him after that for ever as he wants, is just wrong. so it was his only possible Choice, Vivian..

Great story! I may have been distracted, but how old is Vivian? It would be interesting to know if she is also an expert in keyholding, in addition to being a graduate therapist.

Nice surprise ending.

Absolutely love this story!

Great ending - but I also want the continuation, if you’ll wrote it.:)

What a fabulous story! One of the best I have read. So very well done both in Contant and writing. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination and talent with us.

Well written and entertaining story. I'm not a fan of humiliation so those parts didn't do anything for me but the rest was pretty hot. Definitely think you need another chapter to explain why he picked Vivian to be his keyhole plus to further explore his relationship with all 3 women.

More please

A great twist in the ending. I would like to find out what you have in mind for Vivian as the key holder and how she factors in to the relationship with the other two, so yes another chapter please.

5 star

More, more! We need a follow up for Bobbie (she needed some dick, what she may do to obtain more?) and another for Kathleen (she likes tide horses, maybe she may do again) and another for Dr. Viv...

Three new follow ups at least, or maybe more... (about his job, maybe?)

I've been a fan since the Easy Street days. Your work has always been fun to read and well written, but this story is over the top brilliant! Definitely your very best. Great character development, story, and storytelling.

I'll echo some of the comments by encouraging additional chapters. This really is a terrific story.

Pretty good, i did want to see him actually cuckolded after his confession to Kathleen, but other than that, i liked it a lot. Like the little twist at the end.

Equal please. Thank you for not going too deep into cuck fetishes. It was just about right.

Great story. I wish “care and feeding for a non-dominant male” was a real article.

Normally don't go for stories tagged with cuckold, but this was a great story.

What a read! All that needs to be said was done so in previous comments. Much as I would enjoy a nest chapter, I’m perfectly happy with letting my imagination run wild on what could be next. Thanks for a great story, now on to your other writings!

Certified Banger !

Connor just needs to get his cock cut off, maybe then he will be Permanently Satisfied, what a loser!!

I'm midway through the first chapter and I felt compelled to express my joy at finding such a well-written story.

The pacing, the dialogue, the skill in knowing what to share and what to allude to—all first rate.

Heartfeltman Thank you for you comment. The attributes you described are what I strive for, so it is very good to hear it is seen.

Good premise.

But sex -- at least through the end of page two where I gave up -- was simply an non-erotic as a supermarket shopping list.

Totally lacking in details.

Totally lacking in tension.

Three stars == being generous.

Good premise.

But disappointing.

All sex is so automatic. No tension. No reluctance. No forcing.

Just a listing of serial sex acts.

Three stars.