All Comments on 'Susan My Wife - A Beast Unleashed Ch. 01'

True I know I was there

1* for this trash and shit nonsense story.

Waste of time reading this pathetic and mental illness story

A good story basis but needs more detail and stretching out. Waiting for part 2. 4*

waste of cyberspace.. just flush it.

Stop writing its needless!!!

As long as its not a sick fetish B.T.B story its all good.

#1

cuck shit.

You wouldn't know a good story it it was shoved up your sick ass, cocklover.

Quotation marks are NOT optional, and this is filled with run-on sentences.

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She laid down placing her feet in the stirrups and said to me pull my panties off, I undid the little side straps displaying her swollen wet pussy lips.

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That's two sentences, not one.

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She laid down, placing her feet in the stirrups, and said to me, "Pull my panties off." I undid the little side straps displaying her swollen wet pussy lips.

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As another example, the last paragraph, which you wrote as one sentence, is really three.

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We were sad to leave, but what a wonderful time we'd had. Upon our return home Sue reverted to the perfect normal little wife. I knew better and couldn't wait.

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From the Holland reference I infer English is not your native language. So what? That would apply to such concepts as word choice, not quotation marks and run-on sentences.

Please learn the difference between a comma and a period. This was unreadable.

Who cares how badly written it was, it's the content that's garbage. Badly written garbage, is still garbage. Isn't that right btb hater and Hippster? You got to be brain dead to give this trash a four star rating.

Rubbish story try better next time.

try an EDITOR next time. Then start looking for a solicitor as you've given your wife away all because you refused to TALK about the lack of luster in your sex life.

Seems this "lack of communication" is nothing new in the UK... personally or politically.

Mr. Lue is wasting his time in LW session. He should stay in T&C and/or Gay session.....he doesn't belong to LW.....his comments are usually very gay thing to protect the husbands who enjoys sucking cocks and/or licking cum out of his STD cunt wives.

Anyways, 1* for this trash and pathetic story.

What waste of time reading all this garbage.

This story is so nonsense, pathetic, poor written, low context, wimp and pure lame.

Perhaps the writer would have better chance to publish this garbage in the T&C and/or Gay session rather than LW session. The LW readers usually do not appreciate gay guys pretending they are wimp husbands looking for big cocks to clean the loads of cum out of their STD cunt wives.

1* for this shit.