All Comments on 'Susan's Descent'

Only married two years.

She makes no real attempt to improve the sex life but has no problem blaming him.

Then she dumps him due to a recession when he has not been out of work that long (remember the whole marriage was only two years).

Hope she gets enslaved and sold overseas.

Written and proceeding well. From a writer's point of view, a little faster would be just perfect! All the best.

Wow. This had me hooked from start to end.... Looking forward for the next chapters