All Comments on 'Susan's Holiday Ch. 02'

Way too hectic of just about everything. The abuse is too short and the timeline seems to jump around and is too quick. Wake up, coffee, a little dom/sub time, lunch, dom/sub time, abuse, dinner, not sure what / where we are in the story. Then she moves in as a full-time dom? What does he want to do with his job and contacts? A little detail of what she is actually feeling or doing. What does she feel when she is whipping him, or sodomizing him. Seems very little feeling on her part. The salad like clamps were left on even though he said his safe word to try to get her to let up. SHe didn't and just left it on him. Oh well, to each their own.