by socialneanderthal
So to get this straight, she was raped several times by different men whilst the waste of space husband watched, completely indifferent to what was happening.
God! Give me strength.
Maybe when the writer gets out of the sixth grade he will be able to write a good story. Because this is not one. Who would thunkit.
Why in the hell is the wife in the back seat between two guys while her husband is riding shotgun?
What is they say? Oh yeah, "you can't fix stupid." As stories go, they don't get any more stupid than this. By the way shit stain, put your wimp cucky trash in fetish where it belongs. 1*
I've often wondered what makes people like this writer think anyone wants to read about watching his wife be raped while he does nothing. I didn't bother to read most of it, a skim through was enough to turn my stomach.
Maybe should have been in non-consential category. She said no and husband did nothing. Maybe consider a divorce instead of a spa?
Besides the fact that Kyle set his wife up to be gang raped ... Apparently over things that happened in college while they weren't together.
There's also the fact that there are some gaping holes in the flow of the story.
Poorly written story about a piece of shit husband. Don't waste your time reading this. You'll never get that time back.
One more story of a stupid husband helping his wife be the slut that she have always fantasized.
This marriage is going to the dumpster.
Stupid husband.
What a stupid conclusion to a gang bang rape situation! That piece of shit Kyle just got away with it. Perhaps if she told them she was going to file rape charges against them all UNLESS they all fucked her husband Kyle up the arse... as his punishment. Well that might have been a different twist to the story!
A slutty "married" pair become involved in a multiple rape scene. Needs to be placed in a new category: Slushy Vagina Chronicles or Preceding Divorce with Police Action. Managed to read enough to realize that this is a "vomit story".
A husband who lets his wife get raped is a piece of shit, She'd be better off turning him and them into the police right away. What a jealous scum bag of her college years.
This is certainly no loving wife but of an abused woman with no consent given.
She's nothing but a whore. RAPE? No, she wouldn't keep encouraging they plow her slutty twat, ass, and mouth, if it was rape. She a whore and just had many masters...
So the cuck and the whore who enjoyed being gang raped leave as if nothing even happened?
Amazing that so many commenters blame the wife, call her a whore, etc. Consent is pretty much out the window in a situation like this. These anons are quite the idiots. Again, it is fiction, meant to titilate, so her eventual enthusiastic participation is, … drumroll please,…. Fiction! Anything else and it is just a brutal gang rape and I assume most readers wouldn’t enjoy that, except for a select miserable few.