All Comments on 'Suzy's Dangerous Toy'

by Baztrachian

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geek37geek37over 1 year ago

Great work. This needs a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very well written, I agree that this would be a great start to a series.

zededd2000zededd200012 months ago

A stunningly written story, but I feel the 'pregnant' tag a bit undeserved.

I love the world-building and the detail of it all (agreeing it would make a good series) and the gradual build (or is that descent?) into wanton lust.

If you ever want a few scenes rendered in 3D, let me know.

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