All Comments on 'Swallowtail Ch. 12'

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago

To maintain the quality and intensity of a story like this is a wonderful achievement. Thank you.

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 11 years ago
It amazes me ...

... that even here, at Chapter 12, this story is still as bright and full of surprises as the very first chapter; you have achieved something very special indeed with this major piece of work. I can hardly wait for the next installment even when I am aware that each one brings us closer to the end - and if that can be said of a story, you know you have a real winner.

Thank you - five stars - again ;) !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

(I mean, really. They've been involved a year --- what do they talk about?)

You write really well, and there is a lot that is hot and sweet about this, but somewhere in the middle of this series (and if you dont know where, I can point it out), you switched from a believable and desirable fantasy to a gender flipped 50 Shades. Better written, and homage not parody --- just --- but ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Amazing!

Awesome writing. The real love and human compassion mixed with all the kink that I love, makes this one of the best series Ive ever read. I hope there's more!! Thanks so much for sharing

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