All Comments on 'Swaying Nooses'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great idea

This has the makings of a great story - the concept is cool, the character setup is a good idea, but ... more development. More build up ... a little more detail and a little more teasing.

In My Humble Opinion :-)

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