All Comments on 'Sweet and Strong Ch. 03'

Another nice follow up, but very short. It could have been longer or merged with other chapter. But still nice to read, I like that you try to put details in the story, not only in description of Kaeo's muscles and so on, but in the background and world creation.

Granted, I'll keep it in mind. I want to avoid too long, call me impatient, but I get frustrated if its many pages long.

@Thorix - it's advice based on my experience, as I have one story series consisting of 10 chapters (for now :D ). Dividing story in many chapters is limiting views on every next one part. And some readers may expect sex scenes in every part, when they won't find it, then rates may be lower. Just saying, for me pace was great :)