All Comments on 'Sweet As Candy'

Not really my thing with the rough stuff. I couldn't help but read the hole thing though. Not to far over the top I guess. I hope there will be more to the story.

I appreciate you staying😊. No promises but I do have a rough outline of where i want the story to go, and it explores other categories/themes. I'm currently working on a slightly more ambitious story so thats gonna take me a minute, but regardless thanks for the read.

Nice Story. Takes a lot of patient reading to figure out what's happening, mainly because there are a lot of great words discombobulated by a dearth of proper punctuation. Your story telling has improved a lot since Perfect Sunday, but your writing still lacks attention to being nicely readable. A good writer uses punctuation to identify the language cadence of the story teller as a speaker, or of multiple speakers in dialogue, with pauses, hesitations, sentence endings, etc., with commas, semi-colons, even periods instead of run-on sentences. Editors can enhance a good story with proper punctuation to also make it a well-written one.