All Comments on 'Sweet Aunty's Braless Situation Pt. 01'

Slow Down. Tell your story. We simply need more.

Great Start!

Get an editor. Way too rushed and you need to explain the acronyms. Didn't make a lot of sense as written.

There are serious readers here. Nobody likes half done stories. If you think you are being tantalising, forget it. There are far more interesting stories and writers around.

Very pour hard to follow also way to short and needs more proof reading

So good. Need more