All Comments on 'Sweet Cheating Wife'

And why is he so calm about his wife's cheating? He "fucks her occasionally " to keep her satisfied? What an odd statement. I feed my dog everyday so that he doesn't get hungry. Or something like that. He takes no videos with his phone. He makes no attempt to identify the men. And he walks away. A sad, bitter man. The end? Talk about unfinished stories. This one is leading the pack. So basically this is a terrible story in which we know nothing about the characters except that the wife is a slut and the husband is an uncaring cuckold. It just doesn't get any worse than this.

1 star

. . . not in this case. We have no clues as to whether he’s going to simply divorce her, accept things, or rain down holy Hell.

You need to go back and put her out of your house and then move on !!!!!!!!

Feels unfinished. What is he going to do in the morning?

... Isn't it obvious?

That type of nonsensical thoughts is probably one of the reasons why wifey thought she could get away with cheating. And, turns out, she wasn't wrong.

Still makes you wonder: what does him, acknowledging that his wife is capable of being unfaithful, has to do with him being ok with staying married to her? 'Raising hell' is pointless now (the deed is done), but it doesn't mean that the MC here should stick around in a loveless marriage. And yet...

This is yet another pathetic cuck story. Just another day in LW.

What is a dimple-ridden face?

"The dark bitter night... as the flames that grew from the gasoline engulfed every exit."

Does not do a thing for me, oh well.

one star, nothing more needs to be said

Film it on phone?? Bullshit!

This story needs a part 2. He should have used his cell phone to grab some pictures and video. This marriage is toast, and he should trash her reputation with her family, and friends.

Didn't have anything original, and ending felt as if it needed more, disappointing

The tone that was set does not make it clear if he is leaving for the night or for good.

I laugh every time that I read the comments of stories in this category and realize just how stupid most of the commenters are. They seem to actually believe these stories and some give actually advice on what the characters should do. Some seem to get emotionally upset at them as well. That is something I doubt I will ever understand as they come to a porn website, then click on a category solely dedicated to wives who have sex with other men, and then they get upset when the stories they took the time to read actually have wives having sex with others. Priceless.

There has to be a part 2 where he mans up and has a major confrontation with her. After he kicks her out he moves on and perhaps some retribution while she is ignored by all her friends.

I really hope the husband grows a backbone and kicks her cheating ass out . Forget it I have just looked at the biography of this writer I’m not holding any hopes of burning the bitch . No you are just going to be just like all the rest you are going to turn the husband into a complete pussy . You have got a chance here to be inducted into a class of the elite group of hugely talented writers. And by your last 2 stories I can see you aren’t going to change your going to just turn your story into a pile of garbage by turning the husband into a cuckold. You could of been inducted into a fantastic group of people ( and yes there are loads of female writers in this group as well ) . But I really can’t see you joining a group of very talented writers. You have got a thing about putting men down instead of being equal. That is what a marriage is mainly built on is trust and it doesn’t matter if it 2 men married together or 2 women married together it’s the cheating bit that everyone hates . Because at the end of the day doesn’t matter who it is someone always gets hurt . That is what some writers try to point out in there stories they might think it’s fun and great but at the end of the day it is the pain that they leave behind afterwards. What the killer is that you sorts of writers don’t see that you just think that being a cuckold is fun and easy to write about. Then you wonder why am I getting so much flak about my story. So i put it to you do you want to just be a plain old boring writer that keeps hoping that one of her stories will eventually have tons of likes . Or write a BTB story ( because you have got the talent to and you have got the first page right it’s the second and third pages and maybe more that you write which is going to show people on what you can do ) and join a elite group of very very talented writers that help each other when they are stuck or when they are stuck you can help them . But the biggest thing is that it’s the respect that they have for each other and the stories that give them respect as a writer. Also your stories always get loads of likes yes you get a few haters but the likes outweighs the haters . And your minimum likes average around 15 and no lower always higher . If you don’t believe me go check have a good look the choice is yours. This is the turning point do you stay writing boring stories or step up to the plate and show your talent at what you can do. The choice is yours

And said, " Stop or I'll shoot." They didn't stop.

If you are a male writer, I just lost a $100.00 bet. Quit lying on your profile.

Sorry, but she isn't sweet. She's a cheating whore and she needs to be kicked out. Hope he took pics on his phone. This guy is a little dumb for letting them get the best of it. Why he didn't call the cops for trespassers (for the record) is really not good, then he should have extended his situation the next day by doing the creative financial changes and getting the paperwork done for a divorce. Present it to her as a done deal and make her leave.

started well and then just stopped - this story is unfinished and underdone. 3 out of 10 and relatively unsophisticated language

Not too shabby

Sweet cheating whore, and a husband heading for cuck city.

Well were is the ending,walking off into the night isn't one.?

pathetic! He fucked her occasionally, WTF that's a loser and end of this pile of shit

The man is a moronic idiot.

They'd all get theirs and there would be 3 new faces in hell for breakfast!

It's a story people, if you just want talk about " how pathetic the husband is" then

Why read it. The story was well written katieboobs.

This is a great start to a cheating wife story, but it is no where near complete. What man would just turn and walk away. In a story like this it should have some form of revenge, then divorce and then have the guy find a none cheater to hook up with and spend the rest of his life.. Why not continue it to a conclusion.

Incomplete needs more

What a wimp, scores 1/5 and deservedly so.

What a pussy he is.

Wait in the car until they are finished then go in and enjoy the fresh creampies and let her know you enjoyed watching her at the window.

While outside the window. While the three have their eyes closed. The husband records on his wireless device what's going on inside the bedroom. then, turns it off, enters his wife's number and calls her... Her phone signals an incoming call... She lets it go to voice mail and hears her husband saying; "Hey Honey, Surprise... I'm coming home early, in fact, I should be home in Two minutes.... Love you." Hangs up and records the pandemonium going on in the bedroom as they scramble for their clothes to get out quickly.... He quickly heads to his front door. Leans against the front of the house near the front door and greets the two as they rush out the door by saying...."Hey Guys.... Mike, Chuck... Does your wives know where you are?" The sight is funny as can be. Two grown men, running naked out of his house and into him....With him recording "the Flight of the Intruders". Entering his house, he approaches his wife and says; "About those sexual acts you've always denied me..."

Hot! Should be longer.