All Comments on 'Sweet November Ch. 14'

Compared to earlier chapters, this one appeared more forced and much less erotic. The sex seemed mechanical, the descriptions well-worn, and the bondage scenes unimaginative. It continues the story and at least we are getting to the last 10 days of the month, though I'm not sure the end is in sight yet. This must have been wife's day out -- no mention of our hero's spouse in this -- I guess she did not care to go hunting. I think it would have been a more interesting chapter if the "hero" of the story had managed to keep still and not get caught for four hours; I would like to have seen what his prize might have been. Fairly well-written story and very readable with only a few typos. I hope the next chapter is more like your earlier ones, however.

I agree (up to a point)with the previous comment that it wasn't all that erotic. But! I thought it was an excellent inventive story. His narrative on the the story gains the author points that he would not normaly receive. (I gave him 100) A few questions: 1/ what is his wife doing while he is enjoying himself?

2/Is she going to appear?

and most importantly 3/ when is the next chapter going to appear? Can't wait!!!!!!

THANKS for a great read 'A'

I for one enjoy unanswered questions in a long series. It's what keeps me interested between the moments of erotica. The untraveled path keeps the imagination active. I don't believe this was the most best chapter of the series but in no way was it the worse. The main weakness was the rushed ending which could have been enhanced by more physical scene description, exposure of the activities of the controlling Divas and more dialog between the participants.

Still a 100 without question.

Every slave is 9 or 8 inches god how many stories are going to be made with men that are far from average?

That great, I like to be hunted like this