All Comments on 'Sweet Revenge'

I'm sure I won't be the only one to point this out, but when posting the first part of a multi-part story, indicate that this is not a complete story up front. The best is to put "Chapter 1" in the title, but you could also put it in the story info blurb. At the very least, put a note at the top of the story. Don't wait until the bottom and suddenly cut us off with a "To be continued."

Great start to a long series. Thank you.

Very good start to what looks like an awesome series. Look forward to more

Was a good start, please don't make us wait long for chapter 2. there is nothing worst than leaving the reader hanging while waiting for you to finish the story.

Love your basis here! Could flush the details out a little more. I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

Flushing the toilet while the shower is running would make the shower water turn hot not cold as the toilet is taking the cold water away from the shower.

This point was so distracting to me that I had to comment before I could continue reading.