All Comments on 'Sweet Surrender'

You know, this was really good. Except it didn't ~conclude~. It just kinda...stopped...

I agree with the last comment. Good story but doesn't seem finished. Will there be more?

Very good, well written story, but it just seemed to stop, like it was half a story.

Also, I'm confused - was Anwar Pakistani or Indian? There is a difference, but he seemed to be both!

Well, gentlemen, what can I say? It "just kinda stopped". What do you want: they all lived happily ever after? And Dear Anonymous, don't you think whether Anwar was Indian or Pakistani was the last thing on the narrator's mind when the guy was fucking him? Or do you think it would have made some kind of difference?

sounds like my first time realising I am happy to be the bitch been taken by another man, the feeling does not dwindle it only grows all ways looking for a top to please and this story made it feel personnel as age and uk location same as mine.

Since he didn't cum when he fucked Oliver I would have loved to see him blow his load while getting fucked. That would have cemented his status as a sub bottom bitch