All Comments on 'Sweetest Summer Pie'

I thought this story was very sweet.

Nice. I figured that after the 2nd or 3rd night, the sisters should have just gone into her room and pleasured mom.

well-written. Two caveats:

"as she quickly assessed the situation". not "accessed"

"many shattering orgasms" not 'shuttering"

Keep writing!

AWWWsome !!!!!

Not bad for a short story. The smell of sex in the hallway was probably thick enough to cut with a knife though. Glad Mom was able to join in on the fun. I gave it four stars.

So - So story but not very arousing to me.

Accelerated to quick finish too.

2 stars but I was being generous.

Love to be son catching them alone or all together