All Comments on 'Swim Team Ch. 05 - Stanley'

Really good story but I hope he doesn't fall in with the station wagon man. Stanley and his 2 dads are far better for him

The return to the boys was good. The dad’s questions were a bit unbelievable, but oh well. The story of the boys and their growing experiences is appealing. The idea of Bret being sex trafficked or pimped out is not appealing. Your other storyline writing is far more enjoyable.

You have lost me on the past two chapters.