All Comments on 'Swim Team Ch. 09 - Loft'

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

Not what I was expecting

Waiting for what's next already

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Need more Keith

Anonymousover 1 year ago

I must have missed a few things in the plot somewhere- what does Paolo do for a job? How did they end up saving Bret? How did Paolo knew Bret was being trafficked?

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