All Comments on 'Swimming Practice'

Chapter 2?

I have some ideas

Excellent story! Can’t wait to read more from you!

As this was coming from Chris' POV, it was hot but in that sweet way that only a first time can be. This made me remember my first passionate kiss with a guy. Like Jonas, he also taught me many things, but it was that kiss that taught me who I was. This was beautifully written, realistically described and hopefully only the beginning of this story.

My only disappointment is that it ended! You’re a great writer. This story could have eclipsed into a much longer story. There were a few grammar errors but nothing major. I’m glad you are in my favorites as I can’t wait to read more from you…..maybe another chapter of this one…???

Outstanding! Takes me back to my water polo days, wishing I'd had some 'one on one' instruction like this! Looking forward to Chris and Jonas' next chapter(s)!

More, please?

Wow guys, thanks for the amazing feedback. I’ll see what I can do about a follow up chapter. Watch this space.

Loved it, so much like my first time also in a pool . Thanks for allowing me to recall good memories

Part two has been submitted, hopefully will appear on the site soon. Thanks again for reading.

A 5 star from a male who does not like reading gay stuff but the swim team caught my eye and as I read it. It caught my attention it's not dirty and well written and how it was done at every turn kept my attention. Let me say I enjoyed part 1. And goin to read 2. So good story well done expecially to keep me attention. I read this first but was goin to read the new one but hate to read 2 with our 1 first great job keep it up

Great first chapter. Jonas is so vulnerable as they cuddle and talk afterwards. I wasn’t sure he wanted Chris to be Out… like gay out publicly, just take him out or date and then maybe later be a couple that figures out together how they want to be Out.