All Comments on 'Switched Ch. 01'

Can't wait to read the next part

keep going you have a good story going

I think this is a cool story idea and well written

More please!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter. I like the storyline so far, even without the sex this is a good read

Great start, looking forward to seeing more!

Really dig it so far.

For a story with no actual smut in it, surprisingly deece. Please write more.

Thanks all for the feedback! I'm really looking forward to sharing the rest of the story with you. It's seven chapters completed right now, but I plan to combine them so they're thicker and longer. 7k words is just too short.

So far it seems sincere... And that's a compliment.

Great story so far. I really want to read more

It’s different. I like the writing so far. You’re editing is also very good. I’m pretty anal about catching mistakes. Not that many here for me to complain about. Spelling, and grammatical errors can kill book porn for me quickly. You did great.

I am really enjoying your fantastic story, thank you ! You write very well and have a wonderful imagination, well done .. your story is particularly interesting to me since it represents something I have dreamed of :) I wouldn't react like Chase / Jessica did and would only worry about changing back .. I never was happy about having a male body .. TG Tiffany

Thank you thank you thank you for the kind comments! I go back and re-read them when I need a boost. Still working on a Switched sequel and a different story in the same universe.

An actual plot, with real characters and a reasonably complex narrative that doesn't patronise the reader.

And of course, my old favourite - a conflicted gender switch :) Well written and I look forward to the next chapters.

Good story and premise, I find it interesting that most scenarios involving “Supers” also involve rabid right wing politicians demonising them, and them as a victimised minority, it’d be interesting to see a story where a Super was the villain of the piece, using his/her powers for personal gain, obviously that’d include a secret base under a volcano and laser equipped sharks… Jus’ sayin’ 😉

I've been interested in exploring that idea for a while, @Purplefizz . The comics are just too black and white for my tastes. Anyone with power, whether it's political collections, an army of followers, or the ability to conjure black holes, is a policy maker. And sometimes it's easier to work outside the law, from one's secret volcano lair.

Interesting premise here.

In the early part of the story I was totally lost ! Now to this point of my reading, I have a very loose grip on what's happening.

Being a Hot Rod kid at heart, ( I am actually 73 years old. ) I really like the Garage turned home with a feminine touch.

Back to reading !

I'd read this story when you published it the first time. It's one of the best in the "body swapping" genre on this site, as I nearly read them all.

I wanted to read it again and I'm surprised to see how much I forgot it's so well written.

So thank you for your story, I'm glad you keep an eye on your comments, it gives me hope we'll see more of your world.

Fun story and the best body swap type story. You get 5 stars. The breakdown is 4 for the story and the extra for loving the 928s although I found the 928s4 better in wet weather although you couldn’t do controlled skids and slides well almost controlled….damn trees always jumping in front of the car.

Fun story and the best body swap type story. You get 5 stars. The breakdown is 4 for the story and the extra for loving the 928s although I found the 928s4 better in wet weather although you couldn’t do controlled skids and slides well almost controlled….damn trees always jumping in front of the car.

Love the Story.... Most body change stories jump into sex with a guy, right after being a straight guy before the change so unrealistic.

Really good story. No porn yet and I still gave it five stars.