All Comments on 'Switcheroo!'

I kept expecting her to have known all along. It was fairly hot, but without that emotional connection it felt lacking.

This was pretty good. It was just fun to read. A little silly, but really had a hidden laugh to it all.

Thanks

What's with everyone she dates wanting to watch her fuck someone else? Does she give off I'm a whore vibe or use me like a joint pump pump pass?

I was really expecting that she had figured it out.

Great story. Good flow and pacing.

5*

Tc

I only gave you a four because I was extremely disappointed with the ending. Having Jessica break up with Kyle because he cheated on her was not a bad idea. But from there, you should have expanded on the role playing that you already have in the story. Jessica has already called out Nathan's name in a moment of passion. So the perfect ending has her coming to Nathan to cry on his shoulder about her worthless cheating bastard of a boyfriend. Then as they talk, she confesses that she fell for the swap the first time around, but she figured out what was going on the second time. But she was really into the "Nathan Game" that she plays with Kyle, so she was happy to experience it for real and kept quiet about it. But now that she has had a valid reason to kick poor Kyle out, she wants to be with Nathan without any games or role-playing. 😉

In baseball terms, you hit a looping fly ball just over the head of the shortstop resulting in an on base single. But you were just a little bit off of hitting the home run. 4/5

My opinion , part two should be the brother coming onto the sister. See if she would act on the fantasy.

I think you should rewrite the ending of this story and continue the story with the brother and sister, and them becoming lovers. It has the potential to become a longer and better story.

Agree with the others. This was poorly contrived, but nothing a little theory crafting can't fix.