All Comments on 'Switching Roles'

The English reads a little rough starting out. Switching from past to present and back again in the first paragraph. Good story, maybe try having someone read it out loud to you and listen closely to the flow.

Great premise.

Nicely told.

Great teasing, such as it was, but some involvement of her breasts sure would have been nice.

No problem with the changing of tenses.

But you need an editor/proofreader:

You wrote "she ties his upped body". You meant UPPER body.

You wrote "She lets out a deep content sigh..." You meant CONTENTED.

You wrote "She focusses..." It's FOCUSES.

Nevertheless, sexy at all get out.

Five stars.