by hammondo
Good story which I can really identify with. This is how I always thought my first time would be, with a girl I really liked as well fancied physically, eventually getting together with a slow build up of taking things further until when it was right for us both we'd end up having mutually pleasurable sex.
That was my long time dream and fantasy, although in reality my first time was nothing like that at all. It was certainly a memorable as well as educational(!) experience which I'm currently attempting to write about and will hopefully publish on here at some point.
Exceptionally good effort!
Excellent story, well written with good characterizations, a different twist on an old plot, and, most importantly, some really smoking hot sex! Well done Hammondo! Clearly a 5 star effort, wish I could do more.
I've got to hand it to swots, you know what to do and do what you like. Keep us abreast on how you handle things as they arise
Your much too frequent use of "whilst" and "albeit" is very annoying. Other than that your stories are very enjoyable.