All Comments on 'Sybian Engineer 03'

Good development of the story.

You've left a duplicate section at the end that needs editing out.

Loved the reference to the Moody Blues, but it's the Lost Chord, isn't it?

A wonderful story; thanks for writing.

The dude's only known the girl for a couple of weeks and when she starts talking about marriage to her father he's like "Great!" I'm having a sympathetic panic attack over here. That bitch is crazy.