All Comments on 'Sydney's Descent Ch. 02'

As someone who has been a Gorean Master... many years. Ive been following your story with interest. iIn my opinion, I think the chapters are a little short however. Though the writing is good and I look forward to your story.

A good set up in the first two chapters. I'm wetly eager to follow Sydney's descent. Thanks!

There are only two paths here. One, trade virginity for computer. Two, hit him over the head with said computer, thus destroying it. Or is there a third? Where have you been Kajira Kelli these many years since your last story? The Slave Pen of Ar? Wink. Your writing style is crisp and clean and moves along quickly. Looking forward to the longer chapter.

Ok, you got our attention. Just Do It.