All Comments on 'Sydney's Descent Ch. 03-04'

by kajkelli

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This guy needs a knife to his eye. Maybe both.

jleetechiejleetechieover 3 years ago
Smoking

No you are cooking, turning up the heat nice and slow.

aznlookinguyaznlookinguyover 3 years ago
Much better

Somewhat longer, nice pace, so far nothing is too creative but well written.

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I should have been born under the three moons of Gor. Since I was not, I have to make the best of it with my fantasies in story form.

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