All Comments on 'Symposium Day Ch. 01'

I didn't get past the first few paragraphs. I was looking for a mature theme, not mid-life.

Cheating cunt. Nothing more than a whore. If Dave's health had not turned south, she'd have been fucking him. I feel for her husband, being unknowingly married to a worthless slut.

Can’t wait to see her teaching him how to properly care for the women in his life. 5 Stars

I liked the story. Pace was good as well as the line.

He gave the lady what she wanted and you gave the readers what we all wanted. Good job.

Good one more off it please

I think you could have taken it slightly slower... Explain the background as to why she was so anxious to get the guy into her bed. Clearly an unsatisfied woman who's "been around the block" and the young man is another 'notch' on her 'belt' ... Yes, there's certainly room for expansion - and I'm curious about the Tattoo-artist who actually DID the work... How did hubby react when she had THAT done..??

CES

really liked this story and will be looking for more of them

Perhaps you could have made it more interesting by more gradually introducing Jen's intentions towards the narrator. She's upset with her husband, and would probably want to enhance the experience with some flirting or teasing beforehand.

Really hot! Being a young man, I assume there's more to "cum"??? I hope so.

G

A good short story...AL

Loved it.

God premise.

Could have been less rushed.

Could have used some extendid playing with her tits. Showing her what he liked about them. Showing her how much he ejoyed worshiping them. Maybe a bit of titty fucking.

Nothing with her ass at all? Why?

Travelling along the route of the snake tattoo could have been slower. Could have used se directions from her about how exactly she liked being kissed. And tongued.

Four stars.

having the memory of 'The Older' Lady's attention before, this really sent me over the top.