by Montgomery Quinn
Such a touching story you are writing here! I love the character building, the world building, everything! I don't even care if there is no sex in this, I want to know how they do in the tournament!
Your writing is great, full of believable emotion, relationships, and metaphor. The theme is great as I'm an avid military history buff and both love the WW II era tanks and ships, I have played many of the popular simulation type games. I am enjoying your story immensely and am hoping for more chapters sooner rather then later. Thank you for the great story and I look forward to the adventure with these "girls".
Wow this story is great! In a way this is proof of the saying "less is more", where the setting needs less explanation and the characters have space to develop and shine.
Also, I really hope Akira doesn't forgive her mother too easily. All to often people just go back to being close to toxic assholes with "they're family" as the only good reason.
Great story! Looking forward to the next chapter. Don't rush it, write it when you're ready.
I just gotta ask if you've taken any inspiration from the anime Girls Und Panzer? Cause I'm definitely getting that vibe and I like it. Can't wait to read more.
It's TANKS! Course we want MORE. Oh, and girls they're OK too, I guess.
Oh man, I’m enjoying this! I really hope you keep it rolling (pun intended).
This is great. Not enough tanks on this site! Truthfully, I'm here for story more than smut, and this one is compelling.
Very very interesting, the plot line is both new & so old ... can't wait to read more!! Please don't stop.
Short but beautiful. This is an excellent story that I cannot wait to read more of.
"I couldn't rename Papa's tank."
Such a heartbreaking line, evoking overwhelming sadness, love, and respect.
Tears are flowing as I write this.
Brilliant, please write lots more and longer chapters if you have time please. Deserves more than just five stars.
This one’s great! I just love a story that takes me away to somewhere I’ve never been. It’s fun to get to know these vivid characters, too.
Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.