by sicilianpenner
It seems to have a great start, but the Irish (I'm assuming it's Irish) dialect is a bit difficult to understand at times. But wonderful none-the-less.
Liked this but would not two Werewolves tear each other to shreds in a fit of sexual passion,dothey do it doggie style?What about part 2.
The male in question is not a werewolf, and the female is not trying to turn him into one. Just a clarification. Thankyou.
While I thought you painted a good picture with your words, I could hardly understand the dialect that you were trying for with the female character. Irish? French? Swahili, what?! If you could fix that up to something a little more clear, it would go a long way towards polishing things up.