All Comments on 'Taboo, For Two Please'

by sicilianpenner

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StealthskajiraStealthskajiraalmost 17 years ago
interesting

It seems to have a great start, but the Irish (I'm assuming it's Irish) dialect is a bit difficult to understand at times. But wonderful none-the-less.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
DANGEROUS

Liked this but would not two Werewolves tear each other to shreds in a fit of sexual passion,dothey do it doggie style?What about part 2.

sicilianpennersicilianpenneralmost 17 years agoAuthor
A correction~

The male in question is not a werewolf, and the female is not trying to turn him into one. Just a clarification. Thankyou.

silver_inarisilver_inarialmost 17 years ago
Problematic character dialogue

While I thought you painted a good picture with your words, I could hardly understand the dialect that you were trying for with the female character. Irish? French? Swahili, what?! If you could fix that up to something a little more clear, it would go a long way towards polishing things up.

AcalAcalabout 14 years ago
Missing a lot

You didn't even barely start it... waste of space

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I could hardly understand what the female was saying...

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