by rckplsky
a very nice twist in the story,lol. Nicely paced and well written, Look forwards to reading others.
Pretty good story!! I like Avril Lavigne a lot!! sadly there are very few stories with her.
I especially love the ones like this!!
This story is great and I really don't want to be rude, but have you ever thought about shemales. Perhaps, you have one getting strapon fucked. Wouldn't that be awesome. Anyway, nice story keep it up.
I know this is a story and everything but NO.
Deryck Whibley is NOT gay!!! He is awesomely straight. Lol. Sorry. Haha Anyways, great story. =)
God what a waste of 5 minutes. Weak unbelievable clunky. If I could give you less than 1 star I would have. Sorry.
So Paris and Lindsay are a "bunch" of sluts, but Avril isn't? Even though she fucked someone who she had just met? You're a confused little boy, aren't you? lol. I also found plenty of grammar errors in your story. That really subtracts the pleasure for me. I always stop and re-read the mistake and think to myself "...Ugh... idiot..."