All Comments on 'Take Me Home for Valentine's Day'

Sweet. Now I’m wondering if Andy will pop up and try to win her back!

I love this story. As for newoldguy77, fuck Andy.

i thot it was kinda cheezy but so good in the same way.

Lovely story. And hot. Thanks for a good cum.

This was supposed to be a cheesy Valentine's Love story for women. I usually write for men, but once in a while I have to do a little romance. :)

I think Andy was a really good fixture in this story, since he highlights what it feels like when you are in a relationship with the wrong person. That way, when I presented Jerry, it made more sense that Brooke instantly knew he was the right one. He was everything Andy wasn't, and without Andy, Brooke would not have been ready for Jerry.

Andy won't be popping by to win her back, but he might call a few times to see if he can still fuck her. He's THAT guy.

Thank you for the compliments and your feedback! This story didn't do very well on my Tumblr blog because they only like the incest and rape fantasy stuff. It's nice to have a love story appreciated!

This is a sweet, tender love story, with a marvelous romantic atmosphere. Its flaw is that it is much too short.