All Comments on 'Take Me, Tom Pt. 103-105'

Thank you Boo for a wonderful story!!! I am one who could've read this story for years and enjoyed every moment of it. I look forward to reading about Chloe and Tom moving forward. Thanks again for your time and effort.

I think the best compliment I can give is that I'm sad that the story is done. I'm sure I will be reading it again at some time in the future. Good luck with you're next endeavor, I will be sure to read it also.

It has been a very enjoyable "ride", thanks for sharing!!

If nothing else, I commend your perseverance and commitment to your vision. Yes, it was at times borderline intolerably boring, but at other times an immersive read. Thank you for many hours of entertainment. 4*

Thank you both ( mcalkin84 and topoftheham) for your kind comments. I'm pleased you enjoyed the ride; somewhat long, but hey... I appreciate everyone who has stuck with the storyline. It was a wonderful exercise and outlet for me. I'm into the next storyline now. I facetiously said it wasn't going to stretch to 105 chapters. That's not what my outline says, so who knows. Thanks again...

Excellent story. I stuck with it and I am glad I did. By putting their ages on this last chapter, you put this in excellent context. 5 stars. Bravo!!

Thanks, Demos...I do understand the 'borderline intolerable boring' quip. I've enjoyed it so...As I have said before, a better writer would have cut so much, and made the story tighter. For better to for worse, that ain't me. Hopefully, with the next storyline, I can rein myself in a bit. Don't count on it, but I'll try. Thanks for your comments throughout. They have been helpful. Regards...

I didn’t think it was too long! Don’t worry about the naysayers and you do you. I’ll read and enjoy it with no complaints. Thank you! Five stars all the way through.

This would be reasonable for a first attempt. Why the random mid-sentence or even mid,word double line spacing though. It ruins the flow of the narrative and shows lack of proof reading. The only understandable place for double spacing is between paragraphs but even then is not necessary. Reserve it for between chapters.