All Comments on 'Taken'

This belongs in Non-Consent/Reluctance. There is nothing in any way erotic about this story. Instead it is a turn-off.

This story has merit but in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category. It was a good start, very interesting but not BDSM.

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i read a different version of this with 3 girls and a college guy that was taken at a bus stop after a rock concert. so is this your spin on it or just a lame ass copy that was changed just enough to be different?

Not really sure why all the hate for this story. It's a bit extreme for my tastes, but come on it's just a fantasy.

My fantasy involves MILFS, but this was good. Looking forward to more.

Who cares if it falls in non-consent vs BDSM? Both fall under fem-dom; get over it.

I would have thought that critics would have already realised that there is a sad lack of categories on this site. I certainly don't think the author tried to mislead anyone. I enjoyed the story and the writing style and I look forward to reading more of the same genre (whatever the heading).

Well done Johnnyd60.

THis was an awesome story.I wish I could be so lucky and meet a couple dominant women like that and become their bitch slut .

When they gave him the pills and cut him loose to remove his clothes - kick the crap out of them. You made no mention of them having the tasers out so he would have simply beat the shit out of them, as they deserved, called the cops and sent them to jail, where they belonged. Bitches be crazy!

He saw their license plate. They're toast. Implausible piece of garbage.

Please continue, I love this story

I liked the kidnapping, bondage, and hood. Didn’t care for the beating.