Taken Ch. 03

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Part 3 of the 3 part series

Updated 09/30/2022
Created 07/18/2012
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-Sage-

I woke up in the middle of the night, covered in sweat. I felt absolutely awful. "Babe?" I said, nudging Shane. He stirred a bit before opening his eyes. When he did, he looked at me concerned.

"Sage! Baby, are you okay?" he asked, sitting up and turning on the light on the bedside table.

"I don't feel well," I said, feeling another wave of nausea pass over me.

"Do I need to take you to the hospital?" he asked, ready to throw on his clothes and take me wherever he needed to.

"I'm not sure... bucket," I said, covering my mouth with my hand. He jumped up and brought me the small trashcan from our bathroom. I vomited inside of it and laid back in the bed. I closed my eyes as sweat poured from my forehead.

"I'm taking you to the hospital," he said, standing up and walking to the closet to get dressed.

"No, Shane... I think I'll be fine," I said, patting the bed next to me but he didn't budge.

"You don't look good, Love. Let me at least get you a cool rag for your forehead," he pleaded until I nodded my head.

"I'll be right back," he said, worry covering his handsome face. He came back with a wet rag with ice in it. He placed it on my hot forehead causing me to sigh in relief. It felt like heaven...

-Shane-

I didn't like the way she looked. I wanted to take her to the hospital to get her checked out but she refused. I stayed up most of the night, dabbing her forehead and emptying the trashcan for her. She never stopped vomiting, doing so between two and three times an hour. It scared me.

By ten o'clock the following morning, she looked like hell and seemed weak. "That's it, Sage. I'm taking you to the hospital," I said, soaping up a towel to clean her up and get her dressed. She was too weak to argue. After we both were clean and dressed, I picked her up and loaded her into the car.

-Sage-

I squinted at the sun's brightness. I was fading in and out of consciousness as I looked out of my window. "Sage? Sage!" Shane shouted when I faded out again. I knew I was dehydrated. That much vomiting with no fluid intake, that was exactly what was wrong but why?

I looked at his concerned face to let him know I was still here. I had never seen him so afraid of anything before. If I wasn't feeling so bad, I would have felt special.

Within five minutes, we were pulling up to St. Sweeny Medical Center. It was an okay hospital but not as good as Jefferson Memorial. This one was closer anyway. He parked the car and picked me up into his arms and carried me into the Emergency Department and checked me in with the receptionist.

"Her name?" the woman asked.

"Sage. Sage Austin," Shane replied.

He handed her my driver's license, my insurance card (that was through his company), and our marriage license to justify the different last names.

"Right this way," the woman said, passing us off to a nurse.

She did my vitals and put us into out room. From check-in to our room, I vomited three times... the frequency was increasing. After being in the room for about fifteen minutes, the nurse came in and drew some blood. She also did a cath on me because I was too weak to go to the bathroom on my own. The blood draw confirmed the dehydration and after giving me a dose of Zofran, started IV fluids. Thirty minutes into the infusion and I already was beginning to feel better.

Before long, there was a knock on the door. "Come in," Shane said and continued to hold my hand. God, I loved that man. When the door opened, a police officer came in.

"Mr. Austin, is it okay if I have a word with Mrs. Austin... alone?" the officer asked. Shane looked at me and I nodded. He got to his feet and walked outside the room.

"Sage? Sage Cooper?" the officer asked, walking closer to the bed. His name badge read 'Greene'.

"Cooper's my maiden name, yes," I confirmed. I was determined to play it cool.

"Mrs. Austin, I'll cut to the chase. You were reported missing over six months ago. We have been on the case for awhile now. Were you taken from the parking garage against your will?" he asked, taking out his notepad.

"No, Sir. I just picked up and left, met Shane and married him soon after," I lied. I lied so well that even I believed it.

"So you were not abducted or in any danger at any time?" he reiterated, scribbling in his notepad.

"No, Sir. I just got fed up with life and left to start a new one," I said, shrugging, "Is that a crime, Officer?"

"No, Ma'am. I'm gonna close this case and inform the people of your past," he said, shutting the notepad and putting it away.

"Thank you, Sir," I said, smiling.

"Sure thing," he said, leaving the room. Shane walked in as soon as he left. He knew what I did. He smiled at me and kissed my forehead.

"How are you feeling?" he asked, concerned.

"A lot better. I love you," I said, looking into those sky blue eyes that I loved so much.

"I love you, too, Sage," he said, taking my hand into his. After another few minutes, there was another knock on the door. Shane rolled his eyes in frustration. "Come in!" he said again. The door opened and this time it was the short, balding doctor, Dr. Abdullah.

"Good afternoon, Mr. and Mrs. Austin," he said, smiling, "I was coming in to inform you of your diagnosis. The excessive vomiting is consistent with the diagnosis of Hyperemesis Gravidarum-," he said. He was still talking but my brain went numb. I knew that sickness.

"So you're saying I'm-" I began, but Dr. Abdullah finished my sentence.

"Pregnant, yes, Dear, about eight weeks along," he said, smiling.

I looked at Shane who was weeding through the medical jargon in shock. I smiled at him and kissed him on the lips.

"I'm gonna be a father?" he asked, pointing to himself.

"Yes, Babe... we're going to have a baby!" I said, beaming. I had never been so happy in my entire life! It seemed like everything was falling into place for us... everything was perfect.

[Four Months Later]

-Shane-

I looked down at Sage's sleeping face thanking God that she was mine, though I felt that God may not have anything for me anymore. I am, after all, a rapist and kidnapper and I'm pretty sure He isn't too thrilled with me. Though in the ten months that Sage and I had been together, I've determined that she was just as fucked up as I was. A match made in heaven if I do say so myself.

Her frame was snuggled up against mine, her rounded belly pressed against my side... periodically, I felt my baby girl kicking at me. I smiled to myself... Whatever punishment I endure in the afterlife would be worth it for just five minutes of the perfect life that I am living.

"Shane?" she asked, opening one eye.

"Yeah?"

"What time is it?" she asked, closing it back and snuggling back into me.

"Almost 4:30 in the afternoon," I replied, pressing a kiss to her forehead.

"Almost dinner time," she said, smiling. She was too cute.

"What would you like? I'll make whatever you want," I offered.

"Whatever I want?" she asked, trailing her nails along my bare chest and stomach over the bulge in my boxers.

I shuddered at the feel of her teasing touch. "Easy, Nymphette," I said, quickly stilling her hand... I had just finished fucking her after lunch. It was a lazy 'fucking' Sunday. "It's been hours since you've fed my daughter. Feed her and I'll feed you," I said, winking at her.

"Fine," she grumbled, sitting up to stretch, "I'll hold you to that."

"What do you want?" I asked again, sitting up, ready to make her dinner.

"What I want is for you to get dressed so you can take me to the grocery store," she said, slipping flip-flops onto her pedicured feet. My wife was so fucking hot and to make things even better, she was about three months away from being a MILF.

"I'll go to the grocery store if you'd just tell me what you want," I said, helping her to her feet after watching her struggle to stand up.

"I could have done that myself," she pouted, "and no, I'll go in. It's a surprise."

She could be so fucking stubborn sometimes but honestly, that was one of the things that I loved most about her. It would be boring to get my way all the time.

-Sage-

I allowed Shane to wrap his strong arm around me to help me downstairs. He was so sweet. I loved how he attentive he was to me and how he kept me thoroughly satisfied. I didn't hurt for anything while I was with him.

"Dammit, Sage, be careful," he growled as I descended the stairs of the front porch without assistance. I looked over my shoulder and smiled at him. "It's not funny."

I admit, I fucked with him a bit much but he was completely overprotective except, of course, during sex...

He opened the passenger door for me and helped me inside. In no time, he was climbing in beside me. The drive to the grocery store was a quick one. I planned to make chicken fried steak with mashed potatoes and green beans. He loved chicken fried steak but it had been awhile since I'd made it.

We pulled into the parking lot and after a few seconds of me trying to convince Shane to let me go inside alone, I was walking inside. After grabbing a hand basket, I walked around, grabbing everything I needed from the shelves.

"Sage?" an extremely familiar voice said behind me, causing my heart to pound audibly in my chest. I closed my eyes and took several breaths before turning around to face my past...

-Malachi-

When she turned around, I felt a surge of emotions wash over my body. Here was the woman that was supposed to be my wife, the woman that had me worried sick for months, the woman that broke my heart standing in front of me with a belly swollen with another man's child.

Her beautiful brown eyes were full of guilt as she looked up at me. We were supposed to be married by now. What the fuck did I do to deserve the shit that she'd put me through? Anger...love...hate...hurt...fuck!

"Why?" I asked, simply.

-Sage-

His question washed over me like a tidal wave... What do I say? He was hurt... I saw it when he looked at me. His eyes rolled over my body and rested on belly... The seed of my betrayal.

"I don't-....Malachi...it just happened. I am so sorry... you'll never know how sorry I am," I said, sincerely.

"Sorry doesn't get my fiancée back. I loved you, Sage... We were so right for each other. Everything was perfect," Malachi said, shaking his head slowly in disbelief, "You were supposed to be my wife, the mother of my children... what happened to us? What did I do wrong?" He asked, his voice breaking.

"You didn't do anything, I promise... It was out of either of our control," I said quietly.

"What the hell do you mean 'out of either of our control'? You fucking ran out on me," the hurt in his eyes turning to hatred, "That's what you told Officer Greene... You fucking left me to be a whore."

His words were worse than a slap in the face. I felt the tears welling in my eyes until they cascaded down my cheeks. "Malachi..." I began but he silenced me.

"Fuck you, Sage," he said to me coldly. I dropped my basket and ran away from him. My heart ached. I never meant to hurt Malachi and I spent the first month with Shane trying to get back to him and now he hated me.

-Shane-

I was sitting in the car when I heard a commotion by the grocery store. I saw Sage running from the store crying. Before I could think about anything, I was out of my car running towards her.

"Baby, what happened?" I asked, grabbing her shoulders. She didn't reply. Instead, she buried her face into my chest and broke down. I looked around helplessly as I tried to figure out what was making her cry.

"Sage, you have to calm down and tell me what happened," I said calmly, trying to calm her down as well. Then, I saw him....her fucking ex. "Get in the fucking car."

I walked over to him and pushed him hard in the chest causing him to stumble back some from the force but this guy was a big, solid motherfucker and I was livid.

"What the fuck did you say to my wife, Asshole?" I shouted, pushing him back again.

"I told her the truth. I know you fucking did something to her! Sage wouldn't have left like that... What the fuck did you do to her!" He shouted, pushing me back.

"Don't be fucking jealous because she made the right choice," I spat, nostrils flaring.

-Sage-

BAM!

I could hear the sound of Malachi's fist connecting with Shane's face from the car. I watched as the blood spewed from his nose...

"Motherfucker..." Shane said before leaning forward and taking Malachi to the ground, punching him in the face, pounding his head into the concrete of the sidewalk. I got out of the car and began running towards them.

"Stop!" I shouted as I ran, "Stop, both of you!" Shane broke concentration, looking up at the sound of my voice.

"Get back in the car!" He shouted, before Malachi gained control by punching him in his mouth. Malachi threw as many hard punches into Shane's stomach as possible. I ran inside the store to get the manager.

The store manager ran outside with me at his heels. "You two need to take this shit off of my fucking property before I call the cops!" he shouted, stopping the tussle.

"Come on, Babe... it's not worth it," I said to Shane, earning me a glare from Malachi.

"I don't know what happened but I know something did," Malachi said, spitting blood, "But if you want to put up this front, Sage... Be my fucking guest... Have a nice life."

"Don't worry, she will," Shane said tauntingly as Malachi walked away.

"Fuck you," Malachi said over his shoulder. I had mixed feelings about what happened. I felt awful about the confrontation and hurting Malachi but I knew that Shane was right: I did make the right choice. I loved Shane with all of my heart and I knew I didn't regret that.

-Shane-

I groaned as I popped my neck and my jaw. That motherfucker had a helluva right hook on him. Sage looked at me, concern painting her beautiful face.

"What?" I asked, the pain causing me to snap a little more than I intended, "Sorry, Babe... you didn't deserve that."

She shook her head and handed me the keys. "What do you say we skip making dinner and get some takeout so I can nurse you back to health?

"I like the sound of that," I said, undressing her sexy, pregnant body with my eyes. I started the car and drove as fast as I safely could so I could get her home and get some treatment.

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Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literate7 months ago

Will you ever finish this series??

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Messed up but don't know how to feel

I am a writer that loves to glorify (because it is easily done) black women. For some reason, I enjoy this story but HATE the downfall of Sage (a beautiful black woman). I agree with some comments, Shane needs some consequences and Sage needs to reclaim her greatness (she was a successful nurse for goodness sakes). Overall though, begrudgingly, I like this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Perfect!

I loved this story. Please continue. Does Malachi ever find out what really happened? Any who, great story.

verbicideverbicideover 7 years ago
Ugh!

Exactly what I was afraid of, some fucked up shit where she "falls in love" with a psychopath. Worst ending ever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I hope you plan on finishing this story!

The way it's written so far, you have wide-open possibilities where to go with it, from where you left-off!

You are a really good writer!

I hope you don't leave the main characters in this story, or Page's grandparents hanging, much longer! I hope you'll give them and us...the rest of the story...(as Paul Harvey used to say! :)

Thank you for your excellent story ideas and writing! I so enjoy your stories!

wingedangel324wingedangel324about 9 years ago
Wow

I hope you plan on finishing!!! I really like this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Man learned this about women, thousands of years ago.

This comment, will be about all three chapters of this "Taken" story, combined. You know people, the story as a whole, Okay?

The rape of the Sabine women a little before and right at the dawn of the ancient Roman Empire. The Roman men over ran a neighboring village of young couples and killed their men and held the young women hostage. The women were then systematically raped and knocked-up, as quickly as the Roman men taking them, could make that happen.

So many times before and after in history, this same tactic was used. The Japanese army invading China and "the Rape of Nanking"? This same tactic used, or some direct dirivitive thereof.

The reason it was used? About half the time, it works!

The women are taken to a place they cannot get out of, no matter how hard they try. They are raped repeatedly, sometimes many times per day or night. They reason for the repetitive rapings, to knock the women up, quickly!

They are treated brutally and told by their captor/rapists, they are loved, if they will just love the captor in return and submit, they will get along fine! That their lives before they were taken and raped, are history now, over with, so the best thing to do is accept their new lives with their new lover, (IE: the rapist), and stop fighting the rapings and submit to the mans authority over them! If they do submit, they will be loved and treated well.

If they fight being raped every night or every time their captors want sex, they are beaten terribly and raped again, over and over, until a self preservation kinda thing, triggers in the womens brains, somehow.

They learn sometimes quickly and so, less painfully, that if they fight, they get shit beat out of them, sometimes bones broken and all that pain and struggle, changes what for them? They get raped, one way or the other, repeatedly! Besides, they already know by this time, that, when they fight being raped, that usually just inflames the rapists desire to fuck them, and the women are the ones truly fucked in every way, at that point!

Finally, the women can't take the abuse and pain any longer, make themselves submit to their rapists, find reasons to keep the captor calm, find good things to say about him, do whatever it takes, to make him happy with them, stop beating or raping them, They might cook for him willingly, do whatever he asks of them, that allows him to treat them calm, with some semblance of dignity and respect!

So, these women, make love to their captors, as they want him to make love to them, not rape them anymore! Do whatever it takes, to keep him from beating shit out of them again!

Of course, its not real love, had no chance of really being true love.

But, by the time the woman realizes this fact, she is usually pregnant with the rapists baby.

Add to this, a set-up phoney marriage and in this story, a rapist who, when calm and loving, is one helluva lover, satifies her needs very well, however primal they may be on both their parts. After a few months, with the womans hormones during pregnancy, softening her approach to everything and everyone, turning her brains to mush, and the woman totally capitulates. What choice did her captor/rapist, give her?

Usually, along with totally submitting to her rapist, out of an act of self preservation and survival, out of rabid fear of this rapists beatings, or worse, she goes along with and starts believing whatever lies he has brainwashed her into believing. Thats all part of this plan, for the rapist to succeed.

She will do anything to keep him calm and treating her with love and respect! Anything it takes to keep him from beating her and taking a chance on loosing the baby he wants her to have for him! She'll do damn near anything, to keep the bastard from raping her again. That shit is damned painful on a woman, in so many hideous ways! So, its a damned powerful weapon for the rapist to use against her!

The woman trying survive, has to figure any way to suvive this and pretty soon, the young woman, is selling herself she is married to the guy, if thats what he keeps forcing her to believe and at least that marriage, gives her and her unborn child, a last name and legitimacy in society.

By the end of the pregnancy, she is leaning on his support and depending upon him helping her and by the time the child is born, she does love the rapist as her husband and the very scenario that happened in this story is comple, has gone full circle. Chalk one huge victory up, for the rapist. The new mother and property of the rapist, score is zero.

Some women will never give in and fight until the rapist gets so angry, he slits her throat, or kills her some other way. This kind of murder by a rapist is quite common in todays world.

Not a good ending for the woman, at all, either way.

But, history records that, men throughout history, who've done as Shane in this story, in his own plan, make this awful and totally sick, demented plan work, about half the time.

Her winding up pregnant by him so soon after he broke her will and she submitted completely to him, helped him succeed much quicker.

I am in no way condoning Shanes behavior in this story. Rape is horrible abuse and never right, no matter who it happens too!

There seems to be some reason that so many authors here, no matter their story content, even in the non-consent/reluctance stories, somehow, the woman ravished or raped, always at some point in the ordeal/sex, starts getting turned-on by the forced fucking she originally hates or is terrified of? How damned ridiclous is this scenario?

Ask any woman ever raped forcefully, if she ever felt at anytime during the forced awful fuck/ordeal with their rapists thrusting away in their bleeding ravished bodies, if they ever felt any pleasure or arousal in being brutally raped? Yeah, right they did!

Must be some kinda weird damned nicey-nice law, that you can't post storys here, with clear depictions of how brutal and unwanted a rape is to most women, all the way through. I don't know what the fuck is going on here, but that kinda shit makes me to stop reading fast and find another story to read, its so stupid and unrealistic!

What? People come to this site, read rape stories and get pissed-off if its written to be as brutal and bloody as a rape usually is? We can't piss them off with a story that is written realistically? What the fuck are these people reading stories like this for, if it makes them sick to read about how awful forcefull rapes are, to the women enduring them? What the fuck is WRONG with this picture? Come on people, lets GET REAL!

This story is based in historical fact, whether wittingly or not, on the writers part.

So to me, the story has some legitimacy, even though it seems to be pure fiction.

Most of the stories on literotica, are stroker stories, anyway. Most writers here, their storys are their own fantasies, in written form.

Many are lousy writing and not worth reading very far.

But some, like this story, in my opinion, are pretty well thought-out, well planned/plotted-out, well executed and pretty well written! For a stroker story, this one is pretty good!

Whoever wrote this story, wrote it well! I liked it, and that settles it for me, in my opinion!

Time to go on reading some more stories and find another I like here, somewhere!

Later!

ramonbrookramonbrookover 10 years ago
Some sick people out there ....

If you got a good feeling after reading this story then you should really commit yourself for analysis. Yes the name of the story is TAKEN, however I would have hoped the next story would be called RESCUED!

She was kidnapped and brainwashed, how is that love! It was a well written story and if ended differently I would have scored it High .... However gave it a 1!

nieniernienieralmost 11 years ago
Interesting

I have enjoyed this story. During the time that they drove to the store then met up with Malachi I thought for sure something was going to happen.

I don't know now that she has made her decision to be with Shane shouldn't she have gotten in contact with her grandparents. I am sure they were worried to death about her. It's been almost a year without any contact and anything could have happened to them. They raised her.

I hope you decide to continue this story it has been awhile a long while since you update.

Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please finish this dark twisted sexy love story!

You are an awesome writer and this is a great series. So is Just game. Can you please....pretty please finish the series?

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