All Comments on 'Taken on a Cruise Pt. 02'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodle23 days ago

This treats Sara and Matthew like retards and not grown ass adults.

They can say no. In fact, it would actually be refreshing to hear that word because it would mean that your characters have a semblance of decency.

As it stands, they’re candidates for the Special Olympics and not because they’re smart.

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Such bullshit! He could go to the rest his family on board and go to the captain. Fuck the security staff. Beyond that, the slut would know divorce was in her future and the husband would plan two assholes going overboard with his family. That would make for a much better story. I hate this cuck shit.

marlin12marlin1221 days ago

OMG!!! Love this series so far. The forced cuckold is so incredibly hot. Wish that would happen to husband and I. Keep it up!!! Can’t wait for part 3

AnonymousAnonymous19 days ago

I would have preferred to have had Sara sneaking around for a few days trying to serve Phil and Todd whilst keeping it from her husband. Before he finds out towards the end of the cruise

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