All Comments on 'Taken'

Category works; dub con is more/less reluctance that was short lived. Interesting that wife/she remains nameless while her rapist/seducer is named. Probably over analyzing, but half way through when she huffed and plopped down on the couch, reached over to turn the lamp on.and said “So, what now?" I thought of your piece as a dub con caricature. Not a criticism, just “is what it is” as they say. Liked it because I like your work.

Not sure why your stories (especially this one) aren't rated higher, you're a great writer. I love all your stories.

Thank you to both commenters! I am not sure, a few of my stories have over 10k views and aren't listed as HOT. Very odd, not sure why. But either way, I enjoy posting my writing and I never expected to get so many views in the first place. So, I am grateful. Thank you!

Follow up comment: First, thanks for responding to comment — means a lot when an author engages even if mechanism not most efficient (recognizing you could be all day responding). Second, more importantly, not sure what HOT means (other than someone deemed a story highly erotic?). Your stories are very erotic in large part because the sex is not gratuitous rather is part/parcel of your storyline and characters. You delve well/effectively into what is happening with your characters — resonates sometimes in dramatic way, poignant way, or in a simple way. Like your writing; glad you are trying your hand.

Very hot! Fits well into dub con and you set up the story nicely. Looking forward to reading more of your work =)

Strange conflict about semper fi in marraige along with ethical morality values versus loneliness physical desire called needs. Does emotional physical needs override logic societal vows and expectations so easily? ( kinda explains base wives that play when spouses are deployed overseas)

The heart (or parts) wants what it wants?

This was a hot story!

Really liked this story. You're a great writer and I was sucked into the story immediately.

Really enjoyed reading this, Great writing. Not too long, has a good pace and hots up nicely towards the end.