All Comments on 'Taking a Break'

Loved it. What's next for Suzy?

hmmm...I wonder if this is something he has wanted all along... the was no preamble to suggest this...

If he really didn't want it, he could have just said no! The threat of blackmail could have been addressed by saying that he now knows where C lives and will fuck her up if that ever happened and that he would do the same to his wife after the divorce. The set up would have kept me more into it instead of thinking he didnt really want to do this. Plus, 2 weeks is a long time.

Interesting, see where this goes!

Don’t like it at all. It is a basic wife abuses husband with her girlfriend. The same old blackmail and sexual abuse continues while making him a prisoner. There is no backstory, no explanation of why and not even a hint of anything which makes this a copy of a copy of a copy of an unoriginal and not thought out lame wanna be story. How you can go from writing such incredible work to spewing this crap only leads me to believe that you are not the author I thought you were but instead you are just another plagiarizing reader who does have the chops to write anything more than your supposed moniker.

Looking forward to seeing where this goes