All Comments on 'Taking Care of Kara'

Gave this 1 star it’s horrific, literally NOTHING that happens in this story is BDSM. Kidnapping, torture and abuse otherwise known as Human Trafficking. This is NOT a “Rape Fantasy” story instead it’s a fantasy story about rape. Rape Fantasies aka CNC (Consensual Non Consent) are perfectly normal, this isn’t. The wannabe Dom is a mentally unstable person.

If you’re curious as to why I read this then it’s because I was hoping for a Reluctance story, this is probably better suited to the Erotic Horror category.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

Hi Tess!

Thank you for your feedback, I'm sorry you felt that way. When I began this story, it was intended to just be an intense bondage scene between a sub and her Master, but I changed it to something a little more.

It was definitely not my intention to make anything in the realm of torture and abuse.

I started on the second installment of this story (but haven't worked on it in a long time). I actually had planned to weave the story into a supernatural reluctant romance story of sorts. Maybe one day I will be able to continue this story and it might change your view on this first installment.

Either way, thank you for reading!

I liked it. I thought it was well written. You should keep going 🙂

I’m recently widowed, and I needed this.