All Comments on 'Taking Care of Mike'

Look, our may have a decent story, but the way you have two people talking in the same paragraph is confusing. Separate one person from another when they speak and occasionally say who is speaking so the reader doesn't have to stop and figure it out.

I am not a grammar and structure nazi. I make my shares of mistakes, but this one is kind of important. See if you can fix it and submit it to the admins for a revised post. If you use word, play it on audio under review and hear it out.

Hope this helps.

I did not rate you as I could not finish this. Too distracting

There needs to be more chapters.

You have a real identity crisis going on in this story. And when you have Sam sucking another man's cock, you belong in GAY MALE! So please find an editor or do a much better job proof reading. This was a complete mess.

So I took my own advice that we are not here for good grammar but the stories, I kept going and found that I liked it and hope the writer continues with the story.