by Handprints
I liked the mix of immediate action and reminiscence, and the sex is delightful. This story offers good variations on mood and sexual style as well; the changes of pace and emphasis are a pleasure.
Mmm.. I found Chapter 1 hotter, this one winded down some. Still, I'm so eagerly waiting for Chapter 3. More? Please? - Anonymous because I don't have a login here.
Not as over-the-top PERFECT as part 1 was but I have NO complaints about this one! And easily-earned "5 stars" for this one also!
Please consider gracing us with more!
X-Man