All Comments on 'Taking Him Ch. 02'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 8 years ago
Too short

Needed more foreplay.

Why didn't she move out of a bad neighborhood after being raped?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Why

Who said it was a bad neighbourhood? Does rape only occur in bad places? I know this is a story but apply some common sense rape can occur to anyone, anytime, anyplace.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Need More

I like where this is going. Hot, honest sex, an unpleasant past coming back - good stuff. But I need more. I want to know more about Alex besides her love life (lives?). I want to see her at work, shopping, driving around - just being herself. I want to see her as a person, not just a lover or a fighter. I know there's more to her. But does she want to show us?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
NO

NO

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