All Comments on 'Taking It Back Ch. 01'

Very good start to an interesting and intriguing story. Please continue, I’m into these characters already. Thanks.

WOW!!! Great start to what seems like is going to be a powerful and emotional story. I know you've stirred emotions in me as I remember similar feeling from when I was that age. Having a close friend betray you for someone like Shirley can be so devastating when you're going through puberty. The prologue and first chapter were ***** plus and I hope you decide to continue on with Arthur's story. I'd love to know if he ever meets up with Noah again. MLF

Five Stars and Following to see if you continue. Well written and fun to read

Looking for more! Very well written!!!!

Please continue this great story