All Comments on 'Taking My Nerdy Neighbors Virginity'

You need to build up the characters a bit more, describe their looks in detail. Slow build ups are what most of us want to read.

Good first story and fits the latest trend, short to shorter stories. Being a long-time reader, I prefer longer stories (2-3 pages) with buildup, emotional content, vivid details...but to each their own. Good luck with your writing.

Love it when a Padawan gets the better of an inflated Master

Yes but also need a slower build up re characters to take story to next level